Maybe not a masterpiece, bur very cute and fun. Wouldn't mind seeing more of this in the future.
Maybe not a masterpiece, bur very cute and fun. Wouldn't mind seeing more of this in the future.
Thank you! I hope to do more in the future
Although this is very funny I do not appreciate 2 second videos getting dailies so this is gonna have to be a 1 star for me
Stay mad. I'm a winner
I can't understand this
The script is in the description, bud.
This isn't bad but it's not really a movie, I think you should put this on the art portal instead as a gif.
Couldn't figure out how to export it as a gif when i was posting it, but i figured it out now, so ill do that. thanks!
This has a lot of charm to it, I think the video game type of dialogue is cool, it kinda reminds me of Undertale. I really like the musical aspect of this, gives it a lot of personality. One thing I kinda didn't like was that the ending felt sort of abrupt but nonetheless pretty solid.
Thanks for the feedback bro! I appreciate it, I agree about the ending, I'll make sure episode 2 will flow more smoothly :)
This is pretty funny and looks great but I think your first episode had a little more charm, this is really weird for a second episode even tho it is really funny. I kinda wish this was an episode you made later on cuz it was really similar to episode 1 in that it's Hartrup trying to get away with something he's not supposed to be doing, I personally would've prefered if you did an episode that focuses more on Oatley or even the boss. But yeah, as it's own thing I still like it and look foward to seeing more.
agreed. I also think this one is too similar to the first, when I get around to making the next ep it will be pretty different. :^]
This isn't bad, It's nice to see you finally make something. But I'll admit I don't LOVE it, I can appreciate it for being simple but at the same time had I not known this took 2 years to make I think I'd enjoy it more. That's not really anything wrong with the cartoon itself but rather that time that was taken to make it could've been used on something more worth while. It wasn't laugh out loud funny for the most part but is has some charm with it's presentation, I'll say this at least, the 3rd impact to Bill got me so not bad there. I do like the cartoon but I think you could've done better.
I totally see your point of view, definitely took way longer than it should’ve. And not really a belly laugh cartoon, more like a quick chuckle. I do appreciate the thoughts and appreciate you watching and taking the time to leave your honest thoughts on it!!
Put this on the art portal
uhm...don’t think u can do that! ^0^
wow dude fucking awesome bro
damn spongebob
damn spongebob
Greg is just misunderstood and didn't deserve this.
but this is pretty funny and well animated so I'll let it slide
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Tornada
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